Goal: Use similes, metaphors and alliteration to make my writing more interesting.
Once upon a time there lived a town and its name was Avantia. One day, wo wo wo lets jest tack this back a few steps u um.Once
upon a time there lived a boy named tom he
had a friend named Ellana. Tom and Ellana were fighting beasts side by side freeing the good beasts from the bad beasts.They left silver and storm in a cave that was safe for them.Oh I forgot to tell you silver is toms dog and storm is toms horse.Tom went to the woods only to find Ferno the fire dragon. Ferno was going to take them to the grassy plains to look for Spiros the ghost phoenix but they would need some help from the other beasts. Tom said "I think that we need to go to the icy plains to look for Spiros". "Please don't talk when I am talking it is very very rude to talk when other people are talking. Any way lets get back to the story OK,so tom was on Fernos back and they were flying up to the sky to lookfor Spiros the ghost phoenix
when they bumped into someone filmier. It was Seth's sister Sethrina. They had seen Sethrina on a privies Quests when they were
like tigers🐯.Latter on Epos back the other Phoenix they fell into the water but Epos LAVA helped us stay dry and helped us breath under the water.Tom found a trap door.It was like a crab stuck in its shell. Tom used all his strength to brake the door OPEN.The door jammed OPEN in there faces.
